Score: 4

"Meh."

submission: Anaksha: Female Assassin

date: August 13, 2008

It was a fun game, but the backstory was a wee bit boring and, as horribly offensive as I find the term, made me mutter "Feminazi" numerous times during the game.

I also found it slightly offensive that the only people who committed violent crimes in your fictional city were men.

But the most offensive part by far was the stereotypically stupid police force. I can understand that for the game you needed the police to be useless, but the countless insults toward the force in-game made me want give this a zero.

As plenty of people have found out before, Newgrounds is not a good place to try and make a point. The primary audience is teenage boys, for god's sake.

I played the game all the way through, but I'm afraid that I found it too offensive and irritating to rate it any higher than a four.

Score: 3

"Meh."

submission: The Fox

date: May 30, 2008

It just seemed too kids cartoonish, with the way you had the flash end exactly opposite as the original song did.

Would've liked to see it end with the fox eating the goose.

Score: 10

"Made of win."

submission: Big Bag.

date: March 22, 2008

Hi STBFM! It's Ignatz2000 from XGen.

Just a few complaints:
1. For some reason, I had to watch it twice to really appreciate it.
2. The animation, starting where the green circle enters the movie, just burnt my eyes. Maybe it was the animation moving too fast, maybe all the colors, I don't know.
3. The movie started too fast.

Now some suggestions.
Adding one of those intro "A Skelton video/turd" things could really help with both complaints #3 and #1. An abrupt beginning can be good sometimes, but in this case it just gave me a headache.

I have no idea what to suggest for #2. I am not an animator myself, so I'll just leave that solution to you.